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CHOPPY SENTENCES Problem Too many short simple sentences can make your writing appear unsophisticated and your ideas seem disconnected. This impression can also be caused by too many sentences in a row that begin with a simple subject. (Notice repeated subjects beginning the choppy examples below, e.g., She took, She had, She…) Solutions
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